Uniformado |
had the idea on the bus, going to some friend's house and once there recorded the basic stuff: rythm guitar, bass line (not a real bass, just my guitar), lead vocal and the fruity loops drums... and the next day tried my best to fix it!
the lyrics say something like this (let's see if my english is good enough now)...
"i fell in love with a girl who speaks like movies, the kind of beauty that sells soap. i have two dogs, a cat, a gun and a fetish for every single new star on tv. looks like i'm buying satisfaction. under my skin i know i'm in my uniform and ready for action, i walk the streets and have the feeling that i'm walking upside down, i'm doing ok and all i really have to do is listen to you. good morning free world and thanx to the industry for giving us the sun. they say the rebels in orient keep fighting, they say the rebels can't see the food's much better in occident. and every sunday i get depressed by tv shows. under my skin i know i'm in my uniform and ready for action... i'm feeling so alone. don't turn the light in your eyes off, but why do you have to question it all? let's just go to sleep now".
course it's not the same when u translate it but i wanted you to know what it's about.
cheers!
the lyrics say something like this (let's see if my english is good enough now)...
"i fell in love with a girl who speaks like movies, the kind of beauty that sells soap. i have two dogs, a cat, a gun and a fetish for every single new star on tv. looks like i'm buying satisfaction. under my skin i know i'm in my uniform and ready for action, i walk the streets and have the feeling that i'm walking upside down, i'm doing ok and all i really have to do is listen to you. good morning free world and thanx to the industry for giving us the sun. they say the rebels in orient keep fighting, they say the rebels can't see the food's much better in occident. and every sunday i get depressed by tv shows. under my skin i know i'm in my uniform and ready for action... i'm feeling so alone. don't turn the light in your eyes off, but why do you have to question it all? let's just go to sleep now".
course it's not the same when u translate it but i wanted you to know what it's about.
cheers!
great busy bass sounds showing boatloads of imagination......
i don't know what the lyrics mean but who cares you sound like you are having great fun.
the structure of your song hangs well --- perhaps it could do with a stronger, more emphasized hook.
energy ---------- you've got it ------ more like this pleeze
i don't know what the lyrics mean but who cares you sound like you are having great fun.
the structure of your song hangs well --- perhaps it could do with a stronger, more emphasized hook.
energy ---------- you've got it ------ more like this pleeze
Needs better drum sounds, all though the beat is quite good. Pretty good melody. Guitar sound kinda blew too (good playing though). Voice sounds good, and the performance is good. Like the chords. Like the energy. Like the vibe.
Music is good, but I'm left unconvinced by the vocals, they go on for almost all the time and end up sounding pretty repetitive if you're not paying real attention to the words. And I found that tone of voice slightly... grating, but maybe I'm just not used to Argentinian vocals.
Estupendo! |
Me gustó mucho tu canción: letra muy simpática, melodía atractiva, y voz sincera y sin pretensión. Muy buena "demo", para mí: sigue así!
I really enjoyed your song: very nice lyrics, attractive melody, and very sincere and "pretentiousless"* voice! Very good "demo", to me: go on this way!
(* is it the right word?)
I really enjoyed your song: very nice lyrics, attractive melody, and very sincere and "pretentiousless"* voice! Very good "demo", to me: go on this way!
(* is it the right word?)
me gusto bastante tu cancion, osea, no es mi estilo, pero siendo una cancion cn inspiraciones netament d rock argentino, ta muy buena, y la letra esta muy oiginal... sigue asi, y puede q en unos años t escuche en alguna adio, asi cm se escuchan los Babasonicos o Miranda ahora
I really like how upbeat this song is... The guitars are Beatlesque, as are the vocal harmonies.
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