me and my mate matt recorded this a couple of months ago. its very short but id like to hear your oppinion, and maybe some suggestions of what we could do with it next. I was thinking of breaking into and opeth style metal riff!.. but my mate wants to keep it melow...

maybe keeping the mood would be good. i mean a vocal line or something but not necessarily a metal riff... sometimes there's no need to make stuff explode!
dunno... maybe i would use some electronic drum sound or something, as it is a guitar song already...
i don't know!

I have to agree with you, I think this would sound badass if at 20 seconds it broke into some fat metal guitar sound - but something slow powerful and melodic.

I think this would work so much better if you kept the slow mellow way with it. As far as an intro goes I think it's deffinatly what people look for in a song to keep them there. Good show.

I think mellow is good, though some calm heavier guitars could really make it powerfull