A song I wrote about one of my loves that choose to live life without me. Just another in the long saga of twisted tunes. Dont search for true meaning just try to make you own. Thanks hope someone likes it.

It sounds like you have a good voice - although seems partially marred in places by adding a 'whine' to your vocals - not sure if that was intentional or not and you were just really upset! I think its much better without - sounds like you have quite a pronounced voice - so I think it suits balls behind it better! I understand that you were conveying negative emotions - but I think when you strayed on the side of angst rather than self pity it sounded at its best

The vocal melody is very effective in places. I look forward to hearing more vocal/acoustic tracks from you. Good stuff...I can definitely see the potential in that from a polished recording.