#1September 9th, 2010 · 04:14 AM
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United States of America
During the Aftermath
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It’s in the battle 2010-09


During the Aftermath by Isaac Sloan

C G Am F C G

C
Seems like only yesterday
F                       C
That I was living in the city
G                        F                           C        G
Back before they all burned down that day
C
The ashes fell around me
F                       C
As I climbed out of the subway
G                                 F                        C         G
When I saw you there it took my breath away

You stepped out of the shadows
With a far away look in your eye
In the silence I could hear your breath as it fell
I walked (or strode) up beside you
And I whispered "it will be ok"
Then you took my hand I knew this wasn't hell

[Chorus]

Am             C
The orphan kids make
F                                   G
mushroom cloud shaped snowmen
Am           C                           G
As we lay close together in the snow
Am                C
If those cities hadn't burned
F                    G
I wouldn't have you
Am                  C                            G
And I promise that i'll never let you go
F        G        C
Never let you go


You light my day like the sun did
Which is good cause it never shines
And your body keeps me warm in the freezing air
the snow falls through the roof sometimes
The fire flickers but we don't mind
I smile and brush the crystals from your hair

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
C        Em  Dm  C  G                      Am
These feel..ings we feel, love never dies
          C   Am  G   F                         C
These feelings we feel, they keep us alive (these)

Chorus]

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#2September 9th, 2010 · 04:39 AM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
Reminds me a bit to Billy Joel & Jim Croce .
You created a  really good built-on & soulful song for lovers.
Love the mood you´re transporting with this.
I hope the person you´ve dedicated this song feels as you do.
Sound quality is also fine .       Good job!!
                                                                           U.L.I.
#3September 9th, 2010 · 02:33 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,372 posts
United Kingdom
I love the Bridge, I like whats hapennig with the Bass, it supports your vocals and sounds great

It's a well worked song, the structure is great, production is very good

The vox break up in a few places, I think it's breath control, you may want to practice singing long notes and try keeping the sound as even as possible, which will help you to control your breathing. I like you vox tone.

NICE JOB 
#4September 9th, 2010 · 06:20 PM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,808 posts
Puerto Rico
Ah man very pro...A bit Elton Johnish at times...You have a great voice indeed!!!!Superb piano too...Lyrics are very well done!!!!
#5September 10th, 2010 · 04:27 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,372 posts
United Kingdom
This song is in the battle folks, please cast your votes
#6September 11th, 2010 · 04:41 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
That keep us alive......for a while!     Love it.
Really amazing production.
I pick up so many influences and reminiscents that it earns it's own stripes through and through!
Very good.
#7September 11th, 2010 · 05:03 PM
159 threads / 14 songs
2,309 posts
United Kingdom
kings wrote…
That keep us alive......for a while!     Love it.
Really amazing production.
I pick up so many influences and reminiscents that it earns it's own stripes through and through!
Very good.

I mirror

voted too!!!!
#8September 11th, 2010 · 06:49 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,541 posts
Chile
Superb, man!
The production is just perfect. The composition is really good and the arrangements too.
Great job. There's nothing bad I could point out.

            > Iszil
#9September 16th, 2010 · 03:29 AM
14 threads / 13 songs
60 posts
United States of America
Thanks for the positive reviews and suggestions.
Hey thanks for listening to my song and making suggestions. With your help maybe someday I'll write a song that everyone likes.
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