This one has been redone for I think the final time

I can really see your talent in composing . songwriting & arranging your music.
But there are significantly problems with the soundquality & mixing imo :
In the begiining and other quiet parts I could  hear  some acoustic noise very clearly.(just whooshing)
Donīt know,what equipment or tools you use. Maybe itīs something wrong with the channelstrip adjustment.
Have you tried a compressor or noise gate during the recording/?
Conserning the mixing :
Imo the guitar is a little bit in the  īback` and the vox a bit too much in īfront`. Your guitar picking has desevred
to be heard better,I believe.
                                           ULI