Hello there.This is my first musical experiment.I did everything except the guitar, which i only mixed into the composition.Although there are some mistakes (at least) with the rhythm, I hope you enjoy it and please send me your opinions.

At first: Thanks a lot for your revealing comment.
Now to  ´Clockwork Sybil `: Congratulation for this successful  "experiment".
The first minute I felt like in a ´stephen-king-movie ` or something like that. Sounds like  a "Spieluhr".(lovely)
The vocal part makes me feel like in a painting of Salvador Dali . ( great )
Your style is very unique, and this is the most important thing ; your personality !!!
The layered vox are very good balanced . Sound quality & mixing is right.
I´m curious about more.
                      ULI

Thank you so much! I hope I can bring more soon.
Have a great time!!

Ah yes percussion, often over looked by many, it can make all the difference to any composition.
In you next song, think more where to place them, you will be surprised how much character they give.

Keep experimenting they way you are, it sounds great and can only get better.

Edit* Do you have anything clock work in your home, that would sound great, preferasbly something wodden sounding.

Wow.. very interesting style, when you started, it took a very different turn from what I had expected at the start, and with the percussive part it becomes more pop-like. There is a huge promise to this style, it is very evocative, looking forward to more of your work

Yes I know the percussion should have been more taken care of but I will pay more attention to it with the next song.The wooden clock work sound is a great suggestion!
Thank you all for your motivating feedback!