#1August 25th, 2010 · 03:37 PM
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5 posts
Romania
Clockwork Sybil
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This song is not in a battle


Hello there.This is my first musical experiment.I did everything except the guitar, which i only mixed into the composition.Although there are some mistakes (at least) with the rhythm, I hope you enjoy it and please send me your opinions.

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#2August 25th, 2010 · 07:09 PM
117 threads / 27 songs
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Germany
At first: Thanks a lot for your revealing comment.
Now to  ´Clockwork Sybil `: Congratulation for this successful  "experiment".
The first minute I felt like in a ´stephen-king-movie ` or something like that. Sounds like  a "Spieluhr".(lovely)
The vocal part makes me feel like in a painting of Salvador Dali . ( great )
Your style is very unique, and this is the most important thing ; your personality !!!
The layered vox are very good balanced . Sound quality & mixing is right.
I´m curious about more.
                      ULI
#3August 25th, 2010 · 07:53 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
5 posts
Romania
Thank you so much! I hope I can bring more soon.
Have a great time!!
#4August 27th, 2010 · 01:45 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
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United Kingdom
Ah yes percussion, often over looked by many, it can make all the difference to any composition.
In you next song, think more where to place them, you will be surprised how much character they give.

Keep experimenting they way you are, it sounds great and can only get better.

Edit* Do you have anything clock work in your home, that would sound great, preferasbly something wodden sounding.
#5August 29th, 2010 · 03:48 AM
117 threads / 54 songs
3,065 posts
Netherlands
Wow.. very interesting style, when you started, it took a very different turn from what I had expected at the start, and with the percussive part it becomes more pop-like. There is a huge promise to this style, it is very evocative, looking forward to more of your work
#6August 29th, 2010 · 06:00 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
5 posts
Romania
Yes I know the percussion should have been more taken care of but I will pay more attention to it with the next song.The wooden clock work sound is a great suggestion!
Thank you all for your motivating feedback!
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