#1August 22nd, 2010 · 04:34 AM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
Seashore
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This is my very first number I made when I restarted making music  ~ 2003.
The first version was over 13 min. long. (spooky)
Over 3 years or more I worked over it  ~10 times or more. Now I´m goin´to introduce it to you.
Have fun with this little  ´up-tempo-number`
PLEASE WRITE YOUR STATEMENTS, OPPINIONS + ADVICES  !!!
                      

My album "Electronaut" is distibuted on "jamendo.com" http://www.jamendo.com/en/album/101206?refuid=978926 under CC-by-nc-sa 3.0 license for free download.

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#2October 5th, 2010 · 06:03 AM
190 threads / 27 songs
2,845 posts
Germany
Just hearing some Jan Hammer sounds... Miami Vice influences?
The song has a lot of potential for discussions.
IMO it has too many different sounds and this makes it hardly complex, somehow overloaded.
I couldnt concentrate on one specific instrument
Well meant but missed the mark.... seashore.... means to me flowing and warm sand, flowing water, flowing around one's senses.
Other than that I am missing a theme something like a melody line
this is more like a jam (ok a good one).

what was your first record of it? Over the years too much work destroys an origin idea

recording quality is very good, even your skills on keys and guit strings
#3November 16th, 2010 · 03:06 AM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
The song has a lot of potential for discussions.
Tnx Tk for your enlightening review. Be glad not to have heard the first version , haha
Unfortunately there was no discussion about it.
U . L . I .
#4November 16th, 2010 · 01:35 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
I like this..love the drums, I'm a sucker for tight breakbeat
Tend to agree with the jam element..again.
Your playing is quality and your production too, I'm missing a 'song' ; beginning , end and a story in between.

Can you work a structure around lyrics? I have loads, and I kind of know what they need, I like your 'complete' approach to funky music.
#5June 10th, 2011 · 07:20 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Nice track...very clean and tight recording...The wave sounds are cool...well balanced with the instruments...You seem to have a good handle on the recording & mixing....
#6June 12th, 2011 · 11:01 AM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Holly Guacamole!!!...lol Awesome amigo...Another excellent track here...You got some really good song writing and production skills...BTW great guitar work! Love some of those synth sounds..Bass is rocking!!
#7June 19th, 2011 · 02:07 AM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
Thank you very much for your different, encouraging reviews.

@ marino: Love ya new avatar. Funny idea.  Unidentified genius, haha 

Keep ya strings swingin´, ampers!!
U.L.I.
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