And here is the other song, called Sunshine. it's one of my favorites, so I hope you'll enjoy listening

Good vocal, good playing, Too much reverb. (My opinion only of course.)

I don't do much analysis on lyrics, but overall the song is very listenable and I'd come back to it for further listening. It's very "car-drivable."

The coda was particularly a nice change, though there are a few timing glitches.

The last measure just sort of falls flat, maybe have it rise to a big finish?

*edit* - further listening...just wanted to add again, your vocal tone is really excellent.

Thank you very much for your review.
Here are the lyrics of Sunshine

Kheops - Sunshine (D.Purić, G.Vedriš)
Sky's not the limit here flowing gliding
Brown eyes sugar sweet my eyes take me
You you take me you you
Ooh sunshine how I miss you
Ooh sunshine how I miss you

Don't know don't feel swim in your blue steel
Honey dripping sweet taste you bring
You you take me you you you

Ooh sunshine how I miss you … 4x

Sun keeps on shining, sky knows what I'm in
Phone still dialing wondering when you're coming
You you take me you you

Ooh sunshine how I miss you ... 4x

Sunshine won't you come ...

A good structured song again
Maybe you can work on the sound of the acoustic -guitar. In my speakers it sounds a little bit flat or thin, so I miss some bottom. And I think, if you make the acoustic- guitar a bit louder, it will be matched with your vox perfectly.
           ULI

Nice production. Maybe the guitar at the beginning sounds a bit to rough.
Good composition. It reminds me a bit of Van Halen, Iron Maiden and son 80's hard rock.

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