#1July 25th, 2005 · 12:35 AM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
Life's a Beach
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This song is not in a battle


Again I recorded this song on my mp3 player today at 10:00 am (25/07/05). Tell me what you think.

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#2July 31st, 2005 · 11:38 AM
49 threads / 42 songs
493 posts
United Kingdom
I can see the direction you are aiming for. I'd suggest working on the melody to get the 'lead hook' you want, and then start looking towards some more diverse intrumentation, chordal backing etc. Look forward to hearing more
#3August 1st, 2005 · 07:32 AM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
aww this sounds like some of the stuff i started with,
cute!
well done 
#4August 1st, 2005 · 08:41 AM
3 posts
United States of America
re: Life's a Beach
Petermoncrieff wrote…
Again I recorded this song on my mp3 player today at 10:00 am (25/07/05). Tell me what you think.

Its pretty good just needs a lil more umph
#5August 1st, 2005 · 09:00 AM
23 posts
Germany
it's not bad but you need a bit more stuff and other instruments,too. good for the beginning.
#6August 1st, 2005 · 04:23 PM
31 threads / 1 songs
434 posts
United States of America
needs work
meh... sorry, drink coke, play again...

An "A for effort" though lol as some of my old teachers used to say!

but don't give up... keep rockin
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