Hello again again.
Genre: Hmmm... Nu / Heavy / Math Metal (Not really that math)
This was the 3rd song i recorded after learning guitar. I became really ambitious with this one; still it doesn't have an ending.
Enjoy.

Very cool Jorge  3rd song  after  you learning guitar  ? wauw  very good !!
Btw  i like metal and also crust (like extreme noise terror  etc).
Gr. Ed.

AMAZING.

I could imagine some heavy screaming vocals being added to this. Either that, or some very "grunge-rock" vocals. (Like a tenor, with a very scratchy tone.)

Sounds very professional. However, I don't listen to this genre of music much, so I can't give any constructive criticism on any EQ fixes, instrument fixes, etc. Hope I can hear the ending to this soon!

     --XFactor--

Wait,,,,  3rd song recorded after learning guitar?  How long did you play before recording?
Nice track though.  Drums sound good. Live or EZ Drummer?

Thanks. 4 months of playing guitar. And well, 18 years playing piano/keyboard, it became rather easy to learn the basics of guitar after that. The drums are Superior Drummer 2.0, but they are really processed.

Also all this tracks where recorded with my cheap Fender Squier Strat :p.

Very evil sounding.
And a good basic song conception. A melodic line ( guitar,keyboard or whatever ) or a singer will tap the full potential of the song.
By the way: Not the instrument makes the tone , but the fingers.

I'm a sucker for powerful unison guitar/bass (around 1:45 and again around 3:15), and overall the track is very entertaining. I'd like to hear it again with your drums up in the mix a bit. Nice job.