The music is mine, the lyrics belong to the lead singer.I am the guitar player,the name of the band is "Tentatii". We used to play pop-rock for a long time and this was our first alternative song because of a request of a producer,and it was successful.

Lyrics are:

1)
Today I waited for a phone again,
I waited laid down on my bed,
I waited but it didn't ring...

Now I think I know what happened,
You met somebody else,
Much better,stronger man...

Bridge:
I would  want to fly away to the place you are,
To be one single body, to read my eyes...
Do you think you can?

Chorus:
My life is on the line,but I just don;t care at all...
My life is on the line, I would like to turn back,
My life is on the line,but I just don;t care at all...,
My life is on the line,only I know if I still resist...

2)
I tried to understand you,
I stopped to believe you,
The answer comes innocently...

You met somebody else,
Oneday, somewhere,
The answer comes with indifference...

Bridge, Chorus

The end:
Yes, yes, yes...


Enjoy it!

Cool playing and sweet guitar sound, can definitely tell a producer had his hands in there! A catchy chorus, I like this song.

My only minor gripe would be that the double-tracking on the vocals stops them from being so focussed - I woulda rather have had a single voice in the centre of the stereo mix for the verse with perhaps some harmonies - and then brought in the double-tracking for the chorus to thicken up the sound. Just my opinion, doesnt make it right!

Impressed with this song, would like to hear more

Awsome quality! I don't know what language it was in but I liked it. The singer really has a good voice. Catchy riffs, I like the bass lines.

I really like the split vocals. Great guitar sound. Good singing.

Good. I am glad you did this and not pop-rock as I prefer this style. Of corse that is just what I like and tells you nothing of how good it actually is. Shame I have no idea what the lyrics are saying. Slow paced, it keeps a steady beat. Good work.

Very good, man  The bass lines are great, the guitar is cool, like vocals and drums.
I think that changing your style was a good choice. My suggestion: Keep that way 

Pretty cool.  Not that whiney style of singing that so many people are using nowadays.  Can't understand any of the lyrics, but that's all right.  Not bad!

Have to admit, I didn't understand a word of it, but I can say that the diction sounded crystal clear and great ear.  Awesome guitar sound with cool bass progression.

Guitar sounds great.
Soud quality is awesome, I would add a solo somewhere in the song, but... overall is very good.

I like the simplicity of the melody, would have liked to hear a good bridge somewhere in the song. But even without it, it is  agood studio production. Conrats!

i like the guitar sound and the bass is also very nice , just the song is very good , it's a pity that i don't know what you are singing what makes the first verses not so good but that's just me :d it's really a good song !!!!!!! by the way good mixed.

Good alternative song, I really like the bass which is not repetitve and doesn't double the guitar tab. That's creative, I enjoyed the vocals, the singer is talentful

Good alternative song, I really like the bass which is not repetitve and doesn't double the guitar tab. That's creative, I enjoyed the vocals, the singer is talentful

Thanks,guys, really, it's nice to hear your thoughts on this song.
Thank you for all your appreciations of the song. Soon, because a lot of you said that they didn;t understand the lyrics (strange, they are cristal clear  !!), I will also post a translation of the lyrics.
By the way, the language is Romanian, we are a Romanian band!
Thanks again!

Ovidiu Oprescu

nice sound, tight, would love the guitar to get a bit more hectic in some places, good one