Very proffesional quality! Great voice, and the sound itself also has very nice parts. The only thing I would personally do a bit different is the chorus... it could be a little bit stronger, maybe add a guitar.
This great song's tragic flaw is that the payoff needs to come sooner. One thing you might consider is playing an abbreviated melodic instrumental version of the chorus to start the song, then cut the first verse in half. The real hook is the voice, so it doesn't spoil anything, but the nice instant contrast will hook the listener sooner. Think "I'm the only one" by Melissa Etheridge - even if Melissa is not your bag, you have to admit that the song had a certain value that has given it staying power.
Please take my criticism as someone giving their opinion on making something they like even better...this is good work
Please take my criticism as someone giving their opinion on making something they like even better...this is good work
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This song seriously isn't what im into but it's fuckin awsome and I can't help but get it stuck in my head. The production is about as good as it could be and your singing is incredible. I love it
Marshall Black
Marshall Black
Very nice. I agree that it does sound very professional indeed. It is amazing what people can do with modern technology and good music.
Personally, my main interest these days is in Indie music and film. I am so sick of all the manufactured rotten music I hear.
This is very refreshing to hear and enjoy new talent.
Personally, my main interest these days is in Indie music and film. I am so sick of all the manufactured rotten music I hear.
This is very refreshing to hear and enjoy new talent.
Ordinarily, I'm pretty picky about what I listen to on a regular basis but I'll be adding this one to my playlist for sure.
Had a bit of trouble picking out the kick drum but that may only be the fault of the small speakers that I'm using at the moment. I'll have a listen in my studio later.
Great job ... well engineered and produced.
Had a bit of trouble picking out the kick drum but that may only be the fault of the small speakers that I'm using at the moment. I'll have a listen in my studio later.
Great job ... well engineered and produced.
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