Send it to Nintendo and they'll goin to put it in a game! Pretty good!

hahaha the end makes me laugh each time I listen to this

um... joke?

It's like dream theater meets colecovision

i think it make a good intro into a song.

lol! Nice if youre going for a mobile phone ringtone;)  but even then it was a little bit sketchy. It realy needs working on.

i'm not really sure at all about what this is... i mean, it didn't really have a melody... or rhythm... i'm going to put that 'song' into the category of... falling face-first onto a keyboard. but i am interested in hearing it on the clarinet!

Not bad. Keep workin' at it. You'll soon be a regular Keith Emerson.

I'm very happy to inform you all that my new song "Clarinet Carousel" has now been recorded and is on this site in the september battle. It's the full version of this song, and incase you hadn't guessed I recorded it on the clarinet. Hope you like it!

OK I think that this will probably make a good intro (as many others have said) can't wait until u make the full version

that wasnt even a minute long it felt like i was sitting in on some little kids piano lesson.

There was a secondary dominant in there (a V/vi?) that you didn't resolve too well and it makes it seem like a keyboarded version of a poorly done rock vocal. If classical music's your thing, I strongly recommend that you learn what your doing. Keep plugging out melodies and perhaps you can come with a melody that has it's multiple "deviants" and you can actually compose yourself a sonata-allegro that might be half-worth what one comment boardy71 made.