#1June 12th, 2010 · 01:21 AM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,808 posts
Puerto Rico
Mental
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This song is not in a battle


Heres some heavy stuff Im working on...By no means properly mixed nor complete but Im somewhat out of practice as I have being focusing in other things, specially my new relationship(wohoo)!...In any case this is also a track that not many will like as it lays on the heavier side of things..Just wanted to share the little bit Im doing and maybe get some suggestions or ideas... Be well ampers!!

Drums programed on Ezdrummer
4 guitar layers using line 6 pod
1 bass layer..
Im using my firebox preamp on the live instruments..

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#2June 12th, 2010 · 08:27 AM
30 threads / 5 songs
757 posts
Australia
uh huh
once again my friend tight asa   
Please mate your doing ma head in

"(wohoo)"
indeed   
pump that bass thicker deeper Phatter subs +++ .

M man rulz

BTW back in J Land next week with hatz and Y please
 PM me ure snail mail cause we  luv to send you a post card.


greg
#3June 12th, 2010 · 11:16 AM
15 threads / 12 songs
171 posts
United Kingdom
My only suggestions are :

At 1:10 increase the volume of the delay in the gap, it sounds awesome but a bit too quiet imo.

At 1:50 maybe a harmonized rythym guitar before the break down.



Btw the synth near the end is awesome
#4June 12th, 2010 · 12:11 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,371 posts
United Kingdom
Man where did you get energy for this??????? my speakers are SMOKING!!

Ooooooh, so where do you take it, man I hope you can fit a solo in there, you may have to play around with the dynamics, what about Vox??

Nice to see you Back writing again.

Cheers
#5June 12th, 2010 · 06:09 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Your sure as shit beating the living bollocks out something anyway! 
Most people go to a therapist !!!

This really starts at 2:07, it really starts to flow, the way that guitar comes in is soooo nice.....you could do that to me all night!
I dont know if the flute sound is the right thing though..it takes it out of character..it might work for me if there was more and it didn't follow the guitar melody.
But bloody hell what a lot of energy...you must have a mouse arm and square eyes !!   
#6June 13th, 2010 · 06:59 AM
3 threads / 2 songs
9 posts
United States of America
This is really wicked sounding! What preset you use in the farm? This is really tight. m/ m/ !!
#7June 14th, 2010 · 06:48 PM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,808 posts
Puerto Rico
Tx for the feedback guys..Working on a solo and redoing the bass..Also considering adding a bit of a more industrial sound!!!Tx guys!!!
#8June 15th, 2010 · 04:17 PM
158 threads / 13 songs
2,303 posts
United Kingdom
re: Mental
Marino wrote…
Heres some heavy stuff Im working on...By no means properly mixed nor complete but Im somewhat out of practice as I have being focusing in other things, specially my new relationship(wohoo)!...In any case this is also a track that not many will like as it lays on the heavier side of things..Just wanted to share the little bit Im doing and maybe get some suggestions or ideas... Be well ampers!!

Drums programed on Ezdrummer
4 guitar layers using line 6 pod
1 bass layer..
Im using my firebox preamp on the live instruments..

So OK my speakers full up ............. switched this on .............. now in Brown Room!!!

Music to watch weightlifters?? or fast jets,,,,,??

FANTASTIC!!!

Off to the cleaners now..........

Humble fish
#9June 17th, 2010 · 02:52 PM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,930 posts
Canada
Holy epic bouts of mental.
Dude this is really heavy you've got soooo clear recording quality its fantastic!!
DEFINITELY THROW IN A SOLO OR TWO
Make the bass even more sweet if you re-record it. nice job man
#10June 19th, 2010 · 03:35 AM
117 threads / 54 songs
3,065 posts
Netherlands
Pretty damn nice composition, now that Ministry has retired, maybe you can fill up the niche 

Got any vocals? I can imagine a number of things to this, from typical Metallica style to deep and heavy grunting to Biafra's overzealous ranting.. it could all work! Because the music's sooo good!

Keep at it, it's excellent!
#11July 5th, 2010 · 11:23 PM
9 threads / 9 songs
64 posts
Australia
I really enjoyed that. The drums were very nice, definitely one of the best drums sounds I've heard from software. Very well done on the programming too.

IMO, Vox would need a few yells or screams. I'm a big fan of both dirty and clean. Get some screams held on a note and reverb the crap out of it, hold it for a few bars. Thats what I want to hear.
#12July 8th, 2010 · 01:54 PM
30 threads / 25 songs
219 posts
United States of America
Heya Marino my friend.......
 All I can say is.. Wow. my M-audio card actually started to pour smoke out of it lol 
Like Denis mentioned,,,, where do you get the energy. I only want half *s
 *Excellent composition... perfectly exercised as usual....
 *would love to hear a bit of vocal rock screams in it....
A+++++
#13August 23rd, 2010 · 05:11 AM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
A very good basic idea for a metal number.
I think there must be played some melodic themes over the different parts. maybe some fat, orchestral
synth pads could sound pretty well. Try out & see !! (try & error is the way everyone works,I guess)
Just a very mean, hard voice could be the right choice. Who knows?
Keep on workin´on it. It´s worth to do.
                     ULI
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