K I made this with fruity loops, Its my first beat and I'm hoping to get some feed back on how to make it better so I can maybe get someone to rap over it a turn it into a real song. Thanks

Daniel

The levels are WAY OFF the scale, what do you have in the way of monitering the sound?
OK so you have a foundation, it needs a lot work, vary the drums, add fills, accents etc, work on an arrangement ETC ETC.

You say it's your first beat, but you have 25 songs uploaded, I assume it's your first attempt at FL.

Sorry if this sound too negative, I'm sure you can work on it.

It's getting there.....

I'd put the bass through the parametic EQ 2, because it looks nice, and it works, you could also open the fruity leveler as a master effect.
Your hat goes on a bit...the bass goes on just as much but it sounds good...the hat is ...aw!

A good beat ... it's what it's all about! Have you followed some youTube Tutorial.....I was making a Timberland beat a few weeks ago....!