Lyric:

1. vers
I live on a mountain top
I live in a cave
I dont drink from a cup
or eat from a plate.
 
I'm living it wild,
its what I've decided
I go where no man has ever entered with a smile.

Yeah this is freedom
this is life, and now I know how it feels like!

Chorus:
Into the wild
I go into the wild
Into the wild alone
      

Vers 2:
I eat what i find
i dont care what is
not wastin' my time
or do  what anyone says

I'm living it wild,
its what I've decided
I go where no man has ever entered with a smile.

Yeah this is freedom
this is life, and now I know how it feels like!


Chorus:
Into the wild
I go into the wild
Into the wild alone
I go!


Into the wild
I go into the wild
Into the wild alone
Let of the ground
go into the wild
no one to take care of me
I'm alone!

I let off

Nice sound on the guitar, but IMO too loud in the mix, would like to hear the drums driving the rhythm.
I would try raising the key, just think the vox would sound better for the style of the song.

Keep working on it

Hey! holy cow wasn't expecting the heavy distorted guitar sound or anything like that at all...so woah! really great tone on it! I love how this progressed and everything you got goin on. sweet lyrics and vox. just work on the execution of the vox a bit...i think i saw a movie called into the wild or something about the same subject of your lyrics? awesome!
ahgahahgaghagh LOVE!!! the guitar solo and all the playing sweet song and pretty fast moving.

just work on the vocal expression a bit but i really like this!!!      

Thansk for comment. I see what you mean Denis about the guitars is too loud.
Yeah, the lyric IS inspired by the movie Into the wild

Just a pinch too loud, that's all - Denis is right that the drums should drive this song onwards.
I love the sound of the guitar though
A good composition - probably work a little on the vocal delivery (and recording, which was a little muffled to my ears).
Pretty good stuff.
Well done.

To be honest I quite enjoyed that. Apart from the vocals. Sounds a bit like The Cult meets Megadeth in a good way.  With decent vocals it'd be a serious contender for Waynes World 3s soundtrack.  In a good way.

There is the lack of bass guitar in the mix, or is the bassist just not playing much? The guitar riffs are riffing though. Vocals: no comment. Perhaps I'm not suited for this review thing... cool song...