This is the first song I ever wrote by myself.  We've revamped it a little since Brett's been in the band

Another good song...has balls

I've heard better. But this for being a first song written by yourself, it's not completely bad, it just doesn't stand out from anything in any style. Personally I would've thrown in a lot DSP on the vocals, to make it coherent with the lo-fi-ness of the rest of the track, but who am I?