A Live version of a tune of mine I did from 'Zodiac Sessions' in Dublin Ireland. The mp3 is taken straight from the live version. I hope everybody enjoys it, heres also the link to the youtube video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pRdGtchYuJ0. Cheers guys!

Ps Guys this is my first upload on here...so go easy on me!!!! That recording is my first time playing it live aswell, I wrote it over the past six months.

The introduction is very pretty. Voice cuts in, sounds great! Would love to hear this in a band environment, very chills to listen to. "I want you, I want you Unforgettable" (I believe?), can't pinpoint who this is reminiscent of but... Ah!! Makes me think of Incubus! Absolutely awesome, please post a higher quality recording!!

Thanks a million kings for your compliments!! The recording i think sounds best when the volume is put down a bit, its taken straight from the live video of me playing at the Zodiac so hence the loudness but i will have a look and see what i can do!! Thought id put the lyrics up for you:

You've got something dangerous inside of you,
You make me go crazy when I see you,
I want every single little lickable and kissable,
every inch of mystical you.
You've got stars right inside of your mouth, yes you do,
I know 'cause I saw you blink in time with the moon,
Sunset's for you fingerprints and your eyes open to reveal sunrise,
You're my Ms. Universe you.

I want you..
'Casue youre predictable
I want you...
Undressed and wanting

You drink cocktail's with your tender sips in two by two's,
You cause earthquakes when you bat those lids in the way you do,
But in those eyes there hides a disguise and in a heart beat I recognise,
You're so predictable you.
You've got fiesty written on your lip's dark and cruel,
You send shockwaves when you move those hip's in the bedroom,
I get high on your naked sight and I dont care now that I realise,
I'm addicted to you.

I got you...
'Cause youre predictable
I got you...
Undressed and wanting...

In my room,
I take a little step closer over to you,
And right before I go in for my planned swoop,
In your ear I kiss a whisper,
That I got you,
Right where I want you.

I got you...
Right where I want you,
I got you...
Undressed and wanting.......me!

Thanks again man, im really glad you enjoyed it!!

Hey Dade Welcome to BandAMP, we're a small friendly community here, you'll meet some interesting characters, many talented artists and good practical tips to improve.

I watched the video, nice performance, you worked well with the mic. I liked it when you changed the dynamics, would have liked that to come in slightly earlier, and perhaps more of it but not so dramatic.

Thanks a million Dennis for the welcome and the feedback!! Its only my fourth time playing live so im getting there. The dramatic dynamic change is simply following the lyrics, im trying to give off the feeling of the impulse of the wanting, then the getting then with the change its the smugness, if you will or seduction that youve got her exactly where you want. Thanks again and im glad you enjoyed it!