#1April 20th, 2010 · 05:43 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Close My Eyes (Fast)
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This song is not in a battle


When I had originally recorded this song, I thought it was about 20 BPM too slow. This is a re-recording of the song with a faster tempo. I tried to keep it pretty close to the original, but it was very difficult for me to play, comparatively. Also, the tone switch on my guitar has broken, causing things to be a bit bassy.

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#2April 20th, 2010 · 06:30 PM
158 threads / 13 songs
2,303 posts
United Kingdom
This COOl.........
FURRy bottom end..............
I lose the vocs in the mix...............
thru  the beginning ..........1;09
1;29....just dont hear it clear
its a voc mix thing........... I stop
listening 2:18

get the vox clear all the way thru............ its a mix thing ... think about eq on voice 2 lift it out???

fish
#3April 20th, 2010 · 08:35 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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This reminds me a bit of the British invasion...I think picking up the tempo turned out to be a good move...Nice Guitar chord structure...

Good rating
#4April 24th, 2010 · 07:14 AM
3 threads / 2 songs
9 posts
United States of America
I really enjoy the structure of this tune. Very catchy and bouncy, Great listen.
#5April 24th, 2010 · 12:38 PM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,795 posts
Germany
The vocal track doesn't come out as it should be.
Solo guitar distortion sounds synthetic
All in all a brilliant composition
#6April 26th, 2010 · 09:26 AM
30 threads / 25 songs
219 posts
United States of America
An excellent mix.....!  You've got a great sound going ..... and as mentioned before the song itself is quite catchy! The type of tune one could hear over and over again.  Love the whole production....*awesome composition!
Thanks for sharing ~ !
#7April 26th, 2010 · 08:35 PM
2 threads / 1 songs
3 posts
Canada
The song seems a bit overcompressed possibly causing some of the vocal tone issues. Composition wise it's pretty solid.
#8April 27th, 2010 · 02:12 AM
5 threads / 2 songs
7 posts
United States of America
Aiya this is good! Catchy tune, great riffs... haha i enjoyed this song allot.
#9May 3rd, 2010 · 08:53 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Kings, there isn't any compression on the track as a whole. There is only compression on the vocals and bass.
#10May 19th, 2010 · 04:17 AM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,930 posts
Canada
I think your slower one was better although this one is a bit faster and more upbeat and I really like the "say i dont, no i wont" part on this one with the extra "ba ba ba ba ba" in the background.

so this one is really cool too though so im having trouble deciding which one i like better....i think theyre both great in their own way. great job
#11June 5th, 2010 · 04:00 AM
117 threads / 54 songs
3,065 posts
Netherlands
Been listening to more tracks from you of late, your compositions are fit for airplay for sure. You make decent demos, achieving a pleasurable sound but soundwise not quite fit for airplay yet. Doesn't matter much. Do you have a band? If not then get one together and start bringing your stuff to the stages. If you already do so would love to hear what you sound like, live!
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