just finished this "one man projekt"

its all played by myself, but the drums are sampels, also made by myself

enjoy

OMG this is quite awesome.

Some tight rhythm guitar work and decent tone there. I love that  bit around 1:10 where the whisper pans about before the slow headbang bit. Also like the drums, although a little simplistic at points.

Only criticism is that I'd probably have mixed the 'growl' vocals a little less dry. They don't seem to sit too well in that mix.

AND WHERE IS THE EPIC SOLO!?

Nice job.

I like the fact that it doesn't sound like a one man project, that it could be several people in a studio.
Though I have to admit that I like the first one you uploaded much better than this.
This one just isn't my style of music, while the other one is... I Guess i just don't care for electric guitar work...

I have to agree with Nivek. This isn't quite my style.  Regardless it's tight and sounds pretty epic.  I particularly like the drums.

This song kicks ass,get yourself a drummer who really pounds the skins and at will take it over the top.Ever thought of singing the whole song in german?Great job.

Like Ramsshhhhhtein? I agree. Like the guitar sound. This is very good for just one guy!!!

Nice. Reminds me of a certian band I have home. Nice voice. Not as good as the professionals but better than most amatures so work on it and you may have some thing good.

so far, thx a lot guys
i´m just working on it...

In order to make more people like this, consider writing a more melodic vocal line more towards the beginning, maybe do the chorus first, also, maybe so a singing over growling thing for growling parts.

song drags a little bit at certain points,

drums need to be bigger

the ending is too abrupt.

guitar verges on repetitive.

production is ok, but still needs a lot of work.

more work all around.

keep up the good work!

To unfitforduty - a lot of this stuff is simply common, and actually characteristic of the metal genre.  It is not meant to be consonant or pleasant sounding, but rather angry and unpleasant, or dissonant!  You did a good job, dude, but your production can use just a bit more work.  Excellent for a solo project, but more can be added to make it even worse (better)!  Ie. a crazy epic guitar solo as DaveUK suggested, and some runs on the double bass pedal.  Good call including the high china sound - that was key!

I can tell you a good metal song from rust, and this is good, period. Solo, Solo, Solo, need it bad... oh, my neck hurts form the headbangin'....Conrats, now my chiropractor makes money.

It's just unbeliveble that you made that all alone! That's pretty good Death Metal with a kind of melodic background and an interesting voice. THIS really has future. hmm When I'm goin far, I would say give to an official label... but maybe there is room for corrections... like the first part of voice..  It's a bit too nasty. Turn it down one step and you got it!

hate, hate, cars, money, fit in

  Whoa i totally feel a Rob Zombie touch inside. I like it

truly evill!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!