Another unfinished song. You can pretty much stop listening after 1 minute since it repeats. I'm not sure where to go with this one yet. Any suggestions??

I love the Bass line and tone, very nice.

Ok so what you could do is step up the dynamics after a minute, I think a nice horn section defiantly with a trumpet. would go nice after a minute or so, start singing higher, even add some grunge guitar, then you can bring it right down again, you would have to change the drums to suite too.

Well that's my penny's worth 

Now that you mention it I could hear an abstract trumpet thing going on.  I definitely hear it getting loud or fuller then back to quiet. There is a nine inch nails thing that keeps popping in my head after the quiet part which I'm trying to stay away from. I'll keep obsessing over the trumpet idea and maybe come up with something cool. Thanks!!