So far its just one guitar track with some vocals. I know it needs some drums and other guitar parts but just hopping along with it.

Gonna sling some metal(2x)
The one with nook in the hook.
Before we can even speak.
Theres a beak.
Aiming for you and me.
I know its upsired but here come the birds.

Swung at it's head but got my friend's hand.
So instead we go for the blue bunny.
We're gonna go shank the blue bunny(2x)

Until I find, my soda pop can(2x)

Dont make much sense.
Your probably trying to understand.
But hey! Come on man.
It's just a strange dream that I had!

We're gonna go shank the blue bunny(3x)

He knew where just to stab.
No blood flow, although,
should of known.
The carpet is staining.

So lets go shank the blue bunny.
Lets all go shank the blue bunny (everybody)
We're gonna go shank the blue bunny(2x)

Until I find, my soda pop can(2x)

Don't shank it too much





I like the mood in this song paired with the weired lyrics.

Yeah, I like your style.
Just some Drums and Bass in the Chorus maybe, I still like it as it is though.

Funny I though of Swordfish (He's a long term member here, just in case yo don't know already) right at the end, sounded a bit like him

Sword meets Swordfish 

Heh my roomates fault. She has two bunnies and one is blueish. Though I'd never shank it. Maybe shake it though lol.

Not my style, but the weird lyrics seem to be working for me, haha.

Like you mentioned, it could definitely use some electric guitars in there, it sounds a bit empty, but it works as an acoustic piece. The vocals remind me of The Beatles.

3:11 is totally hypnotic... Nice!

Good work.

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