Sorry guys, still don' have a mic
but anyway this is some heavier/rockier track that we've been working on .. its not perfect but tell me your oppinion

is it just me or intro is out of tempo? Anyway the overall sound is nice... Maybe some keyboards would be good?

The guitar riff holds it's own, it's a bit loud in the mix though.
I'd work on the drums and Bass, get it tighter working with the bass, VOX (borrow a mic) would be the icing on the cake.

I like the bridge, but it's a bit messy at the start of it, if you see what I mean.

So yeah, just needs some parade gloss polishing-up and & vox - could be a really nice song.