#1March 16th, 2010 · 05:35 PM
15 threads / 8 songs
322 posts
Sweden
Scream V1 - Demo
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This song is not in a battle


Another 'experiment'? Dunno..
Sounds better with headphones, I think.

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#2March 17th, 2010 · 09:17 AM
187 threads / 27 songs
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Germany
Finally a perfect usage of this f***ng autotune fx
Might heard a plop at 0:52
missing a chorus anyway  nice dancefloor pop

#3March 17th, 2010 · 11:29 AM
15 threads / 8 songs
322 posts
Sweden
TritonKeyboarder wrote…
Finally a perfect usage of this f***ng autotune fx
Might heard a plop at 0:52
missing a chorus anyway  nice dancefloor pop


Yeah, I might scrap the entire song, and record something new..Lyrically I mean. The lyrics were done really quickly, and without much creative thought. I just wanted to get some vocals down for the music to get 'early feedback'.

Thanks Carsten.
#4March 17th, 2010 · 04:17 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,371 posts
United Kingdom
Being repetative is OK so long as you make it interesting, which you can do with the music.

Perhaps work on the vocal melody/varied expression, introduce some harmoney.

I think pop thrives on repetativeness, simply so that people can join-in

Keep workin' on it

It's got potential
#5March 19th, 2010 · 11:45 AM
15 threads / 8 songs
322 posts
Sweden
Denis wrote…
Being repetative is OK so long as you make it interesting, which you can do with the music.

Perhaps work on the vocal melody/varied expression, introduce some harmoney.

I think pop thrives on repetativeness, simply so that people can join-in

Keep workin' on it

It's got potential ;)

Thanks. Any more suggestions? This song needs a lot of work!
#6March 19th, 2010 · 04:43 PM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,801 posts
Germany
To split the chorus from the verses simply add a second voice
#7March 21st, 2010 · 04:48 PM
15 threads / 8 songs
322 posts
Sweden
TritonKeyboarder wrote…
To split the chorus from the verses simply add a second voice

Cool, I will try that.
#8March 21st, 2010 · 07:25 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,541 posts
Chile
I think is a bit monotonous. It needs more dynamism. There's no difference between the verse and chorus.
That needs a lot of work; some arrangements.

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