This is what happens when a love
tries to destroy you...and you find
the will to move on in life.

Connected with the mood and feeling of this song instantly.I really like the arrangement and the lyrics.I think the vocals are a bit off in spots but who am I to criticize,I couldn't sing to save my life.Good job.

Ps Has the heartbreaker heard this?

Its cool...you have a nice voice. I agree that a few notes are off - but you can go and get something from Antares for that!

I like the arrangement too, and the production in general. I look forward to hearing more!

alright, vox need a bit of work.

heh, yeh antares... had forgotten about that stuff... I downloaded "throat" once, couldn't get the damned thing to work..

er, anyway...

nice song. the vocals did sound really nice in some spots.

the percussion sounds interesting to me. almost like vocal percussion in spots. sounds nice.

good song overall. I'd be interested in knowing what you used to create everything.

This is a good song.  It has a Tori Amos feel to it.  Good Job!