Yeah so this is my latest song. I hope u guys don't get bored of me
writing songs about this thing called Love, 24/7...

But let me know what you think I'm pretty much done with this song,
I kiiiinda think that the ending is pretty abrubt but.. I dunno.
I couldn't come up with something more decent so..

Thanks to SkunkApe, who made me experiment with panning a little bit.
And some other helpful rec-tips

I close the door
and the windows in my room
my heart is gonna stay here forever

and I'm gasping for air
but I can't find you anywhere
and I lose myself in memories again

I need you more than ever
I want you back inside my arms
but I know that this is just a waste of time

'cause you're over me and gone
you won't even listen to this song
an easy step for you
made it harder for me..


I wonder if the pictures of us
makes it hard for you to breathe
if you're having trouble sleeping
'cause your thoughts are all about me

If you turn off all the lights and
pretend that I am there and if you
shiver everytime you hear my name

No that is not what you do..


You know I've tried to let you go
I feel so pathetic, I really don't know what to do
but don't you ever think of me?
don't you ever think of me?

So pour me a glass
of your tears and make us even
and throw in on the ground
and maybe you'll see me in the splinters

i lik it, i can relate to it i guess thats why i lik it

The acoustic sounds really sweet, sounds really good just as an acoutic, the synth pad is nice though.

The only thing that you may also want to experiement with is a de-esser on the vox only.

Very well executed, NICE SONG

Keep 'em coming

Reviewing as I listen:
Holy garbage awesome acoustic guitar and REALLY good sound quality on it by the way.
Man I love your voice. You have a really really good voice.
Excellent song thats BLEEDING with feeling man.

Man thats what you do...right there. bam.
Needs a 12 minute guitar solo

Yeah really great song ,and, as said the guitar sound is amazing, a little clean guitar solo maybe wouldn't hurt. I like the little breaks in the song too

THANK YOU Denis

I enjoyed reading that review. One question, what does this "de-esser" do?
Yeah I may have one more song pretty soon ready for upload !

take care

a great song, thank you... is there a slightly chorus fx on the vocals?

Always a pleasure reading your reviews on my songs man,
they cheer me up =) haha I loved the "needs a 12 minute guitar solo"-comment as well ^^
but thank you for listening, I'm really glad u like it.

cheers

Thx Zitto, appreciate it No, I kinda agree with you, I thought
about that guitar solo for a while but it ended up with "just didn't happen", as always
 
  take care

thank you TK, noo, that's actually one voxline, Twice duplicated and panned left/right.
and on one of the (or two) copies, I believe I just put a some sort of Room-fx. "RoomWorks",
I think that's a standard effect in Cubase

thx for listening man


thank u Cpbeats, thanks for listening. yeah, this "love"-thing. Why bother........

wow, the sound of the guitar is very clear and sweet, and the voice is deep and tuned, a beautiful song.

Congratulations.