Recorded a while ago. I listened to it morning today and I kinda like it. Maybe you guys will too. And it's not completed.

I like it too

but!
too much noise, no theme, no hook for recognize it as a song
hate those cut endings, not worth it to put it in a battle, either no votes or low votes.

but!
this track's good to be a background track for some low budget movies

I absolutely agree with you Triton!
There's no sense to put it in the battle, I just wanted people to notice it and review it just like you did (thx).
And yeah, too much noise... I don't have any money to buy a quality gear.

And my dream is to record music for films (especially the low budget ones), so it was a nice compliment of you  .

Thanks.

needs more work.. some kind of clip signal or something @ 1:22.  Sounds like you hit a button and turned something either on or off while recording.. level changed just a bit at that spot..

 I think the idea is pretty cool.. needs more work though.

You don't need quality gear to reduce the noise, I used to have the same problem recording through my Yamaha workstaion due to poor pre-amps. I would check your cables first, then check your levels, hence if you have the gain too high, you will get hiss from the pre-amps. Moniter the levels through your headphones, adjust the gain levels just below the hiss noise. You can always normalise it after.

If you are still having problems after that, something like adobe audition 1.5 has an excellent noise reduction feature. This is what I use, it works great.
If you want some help with recording, PM me with details on your complete set-up, I'll see if I can help, it wont cost you a penny either 

This is definitely soundtrackish, not a song.
I like the atmosphere it creates but there's no line to follow.
Plus I second everything previously said.

             > Iszil

This sounds like it could be a really cool intro to an album or like other said, a soundtrack to a movie. If you added vocals it could be a verse. Good job!

You should make moviesoundtracks man hahaha