This is actually really cool. I enjoy the style. Is not exactly my taste, but is nice to listen.
I just feel that it needs more character. I notice, by the name, that you meant this to an electronic tune but then sometimes I feel it sounds more like an alternative pop/rock tune, so then it ends halfway between both styles with nothing really clear. I actually think this is the drums' fault. If you made them sound tighter and more massive then the whole song would get a greater personality.
Also work on the dynamism on the tune so you always keep the listener on the edge.
I really think this has potential, but needs developing.
I hope I was clear on my review
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> Iszil
I just feel that it needs more character. I notice, by the name, that you meant this to an electronic tune but then sometimes I feel it sounds more like an alternative pop/rock tune, so then it ends halfway between both styles with nothing really clear. I actually think this is the drums' fault. If you made them sound tighter and more massive then the whole song would get a greater personality.
Also work on the dynamism on the tune so you always keep the listener on the edge.
I really think this has potential, but needs developing.
I hope I was clear on my review

> Iszil
I like the deep bass line.. The drums should come up and match it though. cool idea, I like it.
wow this is really awesome dude I cant believe only two people have reviewed this! I cant believe I didnt listen sooner. this is really epic and I really like how you combined the synth and everything in the background to kind of complete the sound. reminds me of a depeche mode jam out break down type thing lol. friggin awesome dude
Rated well!
love the middle section
Rated well!

love the middle section

Bit repetitive....needs more.... |
It's a nice idea and definitely is a good backing for something more....it's something over the top to give that bit more oomph! I have in mind some electronic synth going on to give it more dynamics. The drums needs a bit more presence in the mix too. Like I say, it does have potential but needs some lead motif to give it character....
I thought this was going to be an electronic song at first. I'm not sure what this reminds me of but I like it. Maybe thats what makes it awesome. Vocals or other type of melody would help.
re: Elec-bamica |
Ive got a kind of rule for myself that says a song aint a song without lyrics...
this is a great backing track
Im sure you are singing this song in your head????
lets hear it.........please
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