Um, wrote this on the otherside of New Zealand. It's about admitting you're wrong basically


VERSE 1

There’s a place,
Where the worn becomes the new.
Few people know that it exsists,
Where redemption’s just admittance away.

And dignity will stay,
If situations are level with your head.

My,
What time.
I thought there for a while that i had won.
What a joke,
Falling prey to circumstance light years away.

CHORUS:

It’s a heavy obligation when you’re singing your own song.
And you’ve only just been told that you’re singing it all wrong.
And you think the words can’t change you’ve been singing them too long.

It’s a heavy obligation X3

But there’s a place you can go,
To lighten the load.

VERSE 2

March,
Fell.
April came and went and turned to may.
Today, here I stand clutching on to shame.
Won’t let up,
Waiting here for something to erupt.

Still,
It stays.
Locked inside my body aching maze.
And I’m right.
Right?

CHORUS:


- Chester

I like the arpeggiated chord progressions you have in this song, and I also like your use of dynamics in your playing You also have a soothing voice that really suits the song...I look forward to hearing more.

I even found myself getting my guitar out to play along with it hehe...

Hey thanks man. I do have what I concider better stuff, but I thought seeing as I can't enter them yet, it might be a waste. Or something? My thinking is lacking clarity.

- Chester

Nice Song. Nothing that makes me say "Yeah I'd buy that" or " Yeah that bit is brilliant", but it's still a pretty good song even more so because it's your first go. Keep it up!

its not really the type of music i'd love to listen to, but good job anyway.. i liked the guitar

really like this.  look up two guys who i think you sound kinda similar to and they might help you develop an already beautiful style - damien rice and andy flanagan - particularly andy.

This is a beautiful song. Perfect, for what it is: a beautiful song.  I'm trying real hard to find something I can vengefully criticize, alas... no luck! 

Wow! Thanks Puppet for bringing this back up, I am a sucker for this type of song...
The s's are a just a little bit harsh, but a very enjoyable listen. This has become one of my favorite songs on Bandamp.

Hey that's a lot puppet and creative control

i really like this...maybe i should put some of this kinda stuff on...got tonnes in the arcive and if people enjoy it then its done. well done...the song makes you think about things.

I simply liked it and have nothing to say about interpretation neither playin ...
Very good !

man, i guess u, with Cahuvette r the best in here BandAMP.
u really have a NICE VOICE ( guess i've said that many times, but no way!)  and ur chords progressions r lovely. man, u must record smth!

and, u MUST post more!! wanna hear more from u!!!

There's that voice again.  [sighs]  I can listen to it for countless hours. 
Even find myself humming, singing right along with ya.

March,
Fell.
April came and went and turned to may.
Today, here I stand clutching on to shame.
Won’t let up,
Waiting here for something to erupt.

love it, EG...

your recording technique's have been getting better!

your song writing is superb

Cheers
rod

It stays.
Locked inside my body aching maze.