#1February 11th, 2010 · 04:48 PM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
Heartsick
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This song is not in a battle


meh

There's this girl I know she's so beautiful
Everything she does is just so cute
But she makes me worry

If you stand in this spot
Can you feel how I feel
Can you see where I'm coming from

She's making my heartsick
We're moving in circles
And I don't know
Where I'm supposed to be

One moment I'm happy
Then the next one I worry
I just need to know right now
Where I stand tonight

Standing here in the backyard waiting for your call
Waiting for you call to tell me how
You feel and how you're missing me

Then my phone goes
But it's not you
It's not someone I need to talk to now
I just wanted you to call

She's making my heartsick
We're moving in circles
And I don't know
Where I'm supposed to be

One moment I'm happy
Then the next one I worry
I just need to know right now
Where I stand tonight

Maybe I worry too much
And I'm a little paranoid
But you should know that I am here to stay

Cus when I text you
It means I miss you
And when I don't
It means that I'm waiting for you to miss me too

She's making my heartsick
We're moving in circles
And I don't know
Where I'm supposed to be

One moment I'm happy
Then the next one I worry
I just need to know right now

She's making my heartsick
We're moving in circles
And I don't know
Where I'm supposed to be

One moment I'm happy
Then the next one I worry
I just need to know right now
Where I stand tonight

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#2February 12th, 2010 · 01:59 AM
190 threads / 27 songs
2,845 posts
Germany
Nice tune.
Mic sounds like a headset microphone.
#3February 12th, 2010 · 11:22 AM
15 threads / 8 songs
322 posts
Sweden
I agree very nice tune. Only problems are I don't really like the sound of your mic - it sounds really low quality, whereas your backing music sounds high quality. I also think the guitars could be a bit wider in the mix. Just some suggestions.
#4February 12th, 2010 · 05:50 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,398 posts
United Kingdom
I recently experiemented with the acoustics in my recording room, My Bedroom...lol
I positioned the vocal mic about 18inches away from the door where my bathrobe is hanged, singing about 6 inches from the mic + pop filter, singing at my bathrobe...lol  reducing the ambience in the room, thus creating a fuller direct sound, amzingly it worked. so what type of mic is it anyway.

I think the recording quality is pretty good actually, the only thing that I'm not sure about is the BASS drum, it's a bit overpowering to my ears.

Anyway it's nice track mate
#5February 14th, 2010 · 08:30 AM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
Thanks guys.

Yeah, having microphone troubles AGAIN.

Bass drum is overpowering yeah.. only noticed it when listening with headphones. Thanks for the recording tips .
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