#1January 31st, 2010 · 06:46 PM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
Only a Number
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This song is not in a battle


wrote it in about 20 minutes while waiting for the bus this morning

hope you enjoy listening.

On my travels
I met a guy of 94
He said he don't feel a day past 81
I asked him why
And he told me so
He said

Age is only a number
You only limit yourself in what you do
Why can't you see
That this is real
Look past that number and just see me

On my travels
I met a guy of 34
He said he don't feel a day past 55
I asked him why
And he told me so
He said

Age is only a number
You only limit yourself in what you do
Why can't you see
That this is real
Look past that number and just see me

I am a guy of only 19
And I don't feel a day past 17
In a world that moves along so fast
I wanna stop and just relax cause

Age is only a number
You only limit yourself in what you do
Why can't you see
That this is real
Look past that number and just see me

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#2February 1st, 2010 · 01:27 PM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
Good start (typing as I listen)
Like the introduction of simple piano sound.
Great lyrics... and well delivered (but I'd definitely add more harmonies - especially in the chorus when you sing "age is only a number).  Oh yes, I can hear it now!

Decent recording - good song.
I really enjoyed it.

Jim A
#3February 1st, 2010 · 02:04 PM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,802 posts
Germany
Yes, I would rerecord the voice track
Bit out of tune sometimes

cute lyrics fit to the music
cute melody fits to the lyrics
#4February 2nd, 2010 · 04:39 PM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
Thanks guys!

Yeah having some problems with my mic again, I just need to fix the settings!
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