#1January 18th, 2010 · 07:26 PM
6 threads / 6 songs
18 posts
Sweden
America
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This song is not in a battle


This is a song about all the things you could do in America, hehe.
Took us 2-3 days to record all the stuff and some days to mix until everybody in the band were pleased.

Hope you like it, and if there's anything you think of that could be done better then please write

*EDIT*
I'll add the lyrics to the song below

VERSE 1
I could be a singer, I could rock your world
Everyone would know my name
I would make a fortune, I would score some girls
I would change the hall of fame

PRE-CHORUS
Well I don't know (I don't know)
Where I'll go (Where I'll go)
I don't know where I'm going now

VERSE 2
I could be your hero, I could make your day
I would never turn away
I could be your lover, I could share your life
I would keep you satisfied

PRE-CHORUS
Well I don't know (I don't know)
Where I'll go (Where I'll go)
I don't know where I'm going now
(Aaaaaaah)

CHORUS
These could be the best days of our lives
(But you better be sure when everything comes around)
These could be the best days of our lives

VERSE 3
I could be commercial, I could sell my soul
I guess that I would loose control
I could be an actor, I could live your dream
I would play the one who's mean

PRE-CHORUS
But I don't know (I don't know)
Where I'll go, but I could do it better
I could change the weather
In my life, in my life

CHORUS
These could be the best days of our lives
(But you better be sure when everything comes around)
This could be the time you get it right

BRIDGE
This could be the turning, don't you understand
I could hold the world in the palm of my hand
I could make it happen, I could kiss your ass goodbye

SOLO

CHORUS
These could be the best days of our lives
(But you better be sure when everything comes around)
These could be the best days of our lives

CHORUS
These could be the best days of our lives
And we're seeing things that they'll never see
We're living the American dream

We're living the American dream

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#2January 18th, 2010 · 08:39 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,540 posts
Chile
Professional production.
Good music.
Great guitar tones and vocals.
It's not my style but sounds excellent.

              > Iszil
#3January 19th, 2010 · 03:46 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
Nice job.

Particularly like the ah vox harmonies, would liked to have heard more in the song.

The 'I don't know, where I'll go' is too short, this is a nice hook, repeating the ah's to as mentioned before.

Do that, get it on the radio, and who knows???

Well done
#4January 19th, 2010 · 01:55 PM
7 threads / 7 songs
21 posts
United States of America
Nice! I love the little echo you introduce at 0:22, and comes back a few more times. You should post the lyrics.
#5January 20th, 2010 · 05:15 PM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,932 posts
Canada
dude I love your guys style of music!!!   very cool.
Im glad you guys joined bandamp!

cant wait to hear more
#6January 22nd, 2010 · 03:08 PM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
Love the name "NoShaveNovember"!
Thouroughly enjoyed this song - excellent in all ways as far as I'm concerned.
More please
#7January 22nd, 2010 · 09:12 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
America
Tight as a TICK!!!!!!
Love it .............
guitar a bit soft sounding for me......
then ask yourself .......does he matter ............. of course not!!!!
Compression mad producer!!!!

fish
#8January 23rd, 2010 · 06:27 PM
37 threads / 30 songs
166 posts
United States of America
Really like this song. I could definatly hear this on the radio. Love the background vocal hamony.  On a down note, its hearing songs like this that make my songs sound lame and make me want to stop writing and recording all together.
#9January 24th, 2010 · 12:06 PM
6 threads / 6 songs
18 posts
Sweden
Wow! Thank you SO much for all your nice comments!! Really glad you enjoyed it!
We're currently recording as much we can and we will continue posting songs here for suggestions for improvement

And again, thanks for the nice words. They gave us a push to work even harder!

/ No Shave November
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