Recorded at home... Expressing myself to my former wife

The song comes to life at 1.40, I would have love you to have repeated the first part over a few times between 1.40 and 1.49, there is a real message there.

Again the vox seem buried , you probably over did it with the effects, you have a nice voice, no need for too much effects, try using echo instead of reverb, set on no repeats, that will thicken the vox and bring them more up front.

Nice feel again, it's nice to hear some soul music here on bandAMP, keep 'em, coming!!

Expressing myself to my former wife........................ a hard thing to do ..........
heartbreak............

For Me....

the vocal mix is not clear 'enough' ......... your vocals need to be just a bit more forward in the mix...

after all the song is about what you are saying!!!!

so say it in front of the band!!!

hope that helps .................. Im sure u r still feeling crap ......... but to share it ...get the voice into my face!! haha

empathetic fish

As said by others, vox too far back in the mix and not enough "punch" in them either.  But it's a great recording, and well played and sung.
Your vocals are reminiscient of The Scorpians to my ear.
I enjoyed it.