A song to a former girlfriend.

Love the feel to this... REAL SOUL

Guitar intro is real sweet man.

The dynamics are a bit samy throughout the song, so a change in the arrangement would be nice, you could have a part for example where you are singing your heart out to your 'former gilfirend', ( hope that came out alright...lol) with the music way down low, so that the vox are dominant.

The mix is ok, just think there is too much bass in the vox, slight cut the the bass frequency and a boost of the upper mids will bring your soul shining through even better.

SWEET

FAN TASTIC
HEY YOU HAVE THE GROOVE!!!!!!
Welcome to bandamp and please stick around ............. we can all learn from your so so soulful sound!!!

kersplash the swordfish .......... Man u groove!!!

I aint got it!!!! please sell me some!!!!

I hope the girl came back

Oh very nice start... and it carries on that way too.
Good recording
Nicely played and sung.
I guess it gets a little repetative with snare constantly on the beat, and with what appears to be a constant velocity - but that's a minor point really. You could also work on the vocal dynamics a little.

But overall, it sounds good to me.

aw man what a beautiful piece of music... seriously, Love the lyrics (can you post them?) your vox is so great, really fits the style of the music you're creating.

Wonderful Job, more of this!

// adam

I Want You To Know
By: DJ Dumas


I don’t know what it’s gonna take
To make you really see
Just how much I really love you
And how much you mean to me
You put a spell on me
To make me be true
And it’s keeping me true to myself
But most of all I’m true to you

I want you to know
How much I love you and need you so
I want you to know
I will never, never, never let you go

You’ve been by my side
Every since the first time I met you
And in all that time baby
I’ve grown to love you as I do
I don’t know what it’s gonna take
To help you understand
Just how much you mean to me baby
And how proud I am to be your man

I want you to know
How much I love you and need you so
I want you to know
I will never, never, never let you go
I want you, you, you
I want you to know
I want you to know
I want you to know

Now if you don’t believe in me
I want you to believe in yourself
I only wanna love you
And show you I care
I don’t mean you no harm
I only want to please you
I just wanna stick around
So I can (you know) just do what I do

I want you to know
How much I love you
And need you so
I want you….. To know
Oh yea, oh yea
I’m talking to you baby

This music must come straight out from the deepest areas of your soul, doesnt it?

love the lyrics