I like the subtle chorus effect on the vocals, but I'm afraid it doesn't really fit in with the actual song. The vocal sound out of tune in places, but the tone of your voice is very nice. I feel the whole track needs more depth/richness, to me right now it sounds like a demo. Is it? Anyway...definitely something you can build on.
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