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The whole construction of the song is really good. It reminds me of the american metal bands of the 90s.
The only problem is that guitar sounds a bit plastic and lacks strength what makes the song lose power. I assume you are directly recording it from a effect/pedal to the computer. Try to use and amplifier and also try to equalize it again.
You also need the vocals and a proper ending.
In general, good job. Just finish it.

             > Iszil

yeah I agree with Iszil... nice job done here

thx for the comments. I completely agree. Having a lot of fun in my adventures in narrowing down recording distorted guitar...looking for to the next step.

Just typed a (reasonably) long post on this saying, more or less, that I think it's great but needs vocals!
Everything well played, good construction, etc.  Agree with Iz about the lack of punch for the distorted guitar, but all other sounds are fine (and that could be sorted post recording, add some dynamics to it to give it the missing "punch").
All good, liked it.  But it still needs vocals to be great!