#1November 21st, 2009 · 09:50 AM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
time machine
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This song is not in a battle


bit of a naff girly tune, but i think the hooks ok. theres a few clicks and glitches that arn't supposed to be there. also, it sounds dead flat. dunno if its FL, my soundcard or both but anyway...my headphones make it sound alot better :/

would you step into my time machine,
go back to when we knew nothing,
nothing of eachother or what would be,
just too strangers passing in the street.
would you step into my time machine,
go right back and change everything,
erase all the truth that you now know,
and make it so the cracks don't ever show.

i'm sorry, i never meant to do you wrong...
i'm sorry, that i couldn't be the one...
trouble is...

when you open your heart to let love in,
its wide open to attack.
and if they abuse the trust that you give,
you know it ain't ever coming back. (x2)

if i had a time machine,
i wouldn't change a single thing,
it all makes us strong in the end...

when you open your heart to let love in,
its wide open to attack.
and if they abuse the trust that you give,
you know it ain't ever coming back. (x2)

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#2November 21st, 2009 · 08:28 PM
51 threads / 33 songs
292 posts
Canada
Woahhhhh, this is so hypnotic!

This pretty much put me into a trance throughout...

Love the vocals, like the vocals in all your other songs, haha. Lyrics are just as nice.

I could see this being in a movie or intro to a crime TV show...

Very good work on this. Well done!

    --XFactor--
#3June 10th, 2011 · 06:51 AM
118 threads / 55 songs
3,079 posts
Netherlands
Happy birthday PD! Been a while since you were last online, hope things are well.

Your music has a very special quality, atleast in my ears. Would love to hear some new work if you've produced any.

Have a good day and cheers,

 

PX
#4June 10th, 2011 · 08:54 AM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
Mature lyrics for a "naff girlie" .Very wise words.
Happy birthday , Porzellanpüppchen.
Heard the first time your music and am amazed . This is electronical stuff which doesn´t sound steril as electronical music usually does. This is caused by your lascivious, laconical and clear voice. Love it.
Bit "Zero seven-ish". Wonderful.
Perhaps just the mastering seems to be a lil "overdone".

The fact that you haven´t been here for a long time let me hope, that you´re busy & successful in music.
Please let us know what happened to your musical talent.

Have a nice celebday

U.L.I.
#5June 10th, 2011 · 01:30 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
102 posts
Suriname
First HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! Nice song man, did you sang it yourself??? Everything fits!!
Like it
#6June 10th, 2011 · 07:39 PM
163 threads / 18 songs
2,320 posts
United Kingdom
PuppetXeno wrote…
Happy birthday PD! Been a while since you were last online, hope things are well.

Your music has a very special quality, atleast in my ears. Would love to hear some new work if you've produced any.

Have a good day and cheers,

 

PX


hi P doll

yep we miss u!!!

if u pik up these messages ..... happy birthday and please come back an visit!!

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