There are a few rough moments I know.  Haven't had time to re record.

This is really beautiful.
I think with one day of practicing it to make it sound perfect, it would be amazing.
I like the guitar sound, but I think I would add a bit more of mid frequencies, to thicken up the sound. But not too much, just a little.
Wanna listen a final version, for sure. It reminds me of my acoustic works.

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thanks it was kind of off a whim and i just haven't gotten around to a full polish I will soon have access to one of the best studios in the US and then I hope to rerecord mixing my direct out which is what I used here with either a royer ribbon or a tube condenser mic.

Yeah nice feel, you could still get a good recording without high tech equipment.

Just think it's OVER compressed.

Cheers

Sounds great!

Like Denis and Iszil mentioned, a bit of practice will help and the recording sounds very muffled... I'm not sure if that's the right word to describe it, but when I hear someone play a guitar live (or on a good recording), it emphasizes the low and high areas, in other words, a larger range of pitch. Composition-wise though, it was very well written and played.

Loved the general feel of the song... Kept my attention throughout.

Again, it's not so much your playing or the guitar that's the problem, it's just how you recorded it, haha.

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sounds like kaki king a little bit