Here's the first recording of a new song it's very rough in places sorry

It's got  Lennon & McCartney songwriting characteristics.

 It's quite Catchy, will be great to get your audience to sing it with you.

It may be a little rough in places as you put it, but I love the organic feel, I think a polished version will have less organic feel, personally I prefer as it is, so don't delete.

I think you mentioned in the lyric post that you are working on other parts for your band, it will be interesting to compare the two, please upload the band version when you get the chance.

Anyway, it's a nice song, your vocals are getting better vincent!!!

I like it, your vocals have kind of a classic feel to it
pretty chill & catchy

Wow. I really like the melody, and your voice goes well with it.

I was listening to it again it's very very rough maybe to rough

lyrics are here
http://forum.bandamp.com/Lyrics_Review/24362.html

Lots of feeling in it - cough me from the beginning. actually liked the rough production kind of brought the songwriting to my attention. Your voice reminds me of Morrissey, and that's a compliment as big as they come from me :-)