#1October 28th, 2009 · 08:31 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
And I Close My Eyes

This song is not in a battle

Same as the song called "Foobar," but with lyrics.

Some days I just feel like laying down
And digging myself a hole in the ground
Some days I'm only half awake
And I'm dreaming instead of thinking
all the time

And I close and I close and I close
and I close and I close and I close
and I close and I close my eyes

Say I don't, say I don't
No I won't no I won't live this way again.

In the back of my mind I'm alive and awake
But to everyone else I look asleep and dead
The impression I make is a big mistake
Or is all the subtle meaning lost on me?

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#2October 29th, 2009 · 11:06 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,384 posts
United Kingdom
Hey T>O>G
Well done! -  you managed to complete one of the songs you uploaded recently.
Great sound from this track, nice driving music, or even commercial radio.

Your vox get better as the song goes, would love to hear your vox higher/pushed to your max range, especially in the chorus, I sensed that vocal melody could be higher in the middle and end of the Chorus.

#3October 29th, 2009 · 07:27 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,540 posts
Soundgarden meets californian punk!
Sounds pretty good actually. It's not exactly my cup of tea, but somehow I liked it.
I just felt you voice, or the vocal's line - to be more accurate - got lost in some parts, specially in the chorus and that made it lose a bit of its power. I also would like the lead voice more centered, not that much stereo-fied.
The production was amazing, by the way.
Good job dude.

            > Iszil
#4October 30th, 2009 · 03:15 PM
8 threads / 2 songs
79 posts
United States of America
I like it, it's got a pop-punk feel to it
The guitar & vox sound awesome, this is the type of song I would enjoy listening to
well done
#5May 19th, 2010 · 04:15 AM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,930 posts
This song is really awesome I really love it and I thought I reviewed it before but I guess I hadnt!
I really like it and your style. ace job
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