And I Close My Eyes | ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Same as the song called "Foobar," but with lyrics.
Some days I just feel like laying down
And digging myself a hole in the ground
Some days I'm only half awake
And I'm dreaming instead of thinking
all the time
And I close and I close and I close
and I close and I close and I close
and I close and I close my eyes
Say I don't, say I don't
No I won't no I won't live this way again.
In the back of my mind I'm alive and awake
But to everyone else I look asleep and dead
The impression I make is a big mistake
Or is all the subtle meaning lost on me?
Some days I just feel like laying down
And digging myself a hole in the ground
Some days I'm only half awake
And I'm dreaming instead of thinking
all the time
And I close and I close and I close
and I close and I close and I close
and I close and I close my eyes
Say I don't, say I don't
No I won't no I won't live this way again.
In the back of my mind I'm alive and awake
But to everyone else I look asleep and dead
The impression I make is a big mistake
Or is all the subtle meaning lost on me?
Hey T>O>G
Well done! - you managed to complete one of the songs you uploaded recently.
Great sound from this track, nice driving music, or even commercial radio.
Your vox get better as the song goes, would love to hear your vox higher/pushed to your max range, especially in the chorus, I sensed that vocal melody could be higher in the middle and end of the Chorus.
NICE JOB
Well done! - you managed to complete one of the songs you uploaded recently.
Great sound from this track, nice driving music, or even commercial radio.
Your vox get better as the song goes, would love to hear your vox higher/pushed to your max range, especially in the chorus, I sensed that vocal melody could be higher in the middle and end of the Chorus.
NICE JOB

Soundgarden meets californian punk!
Sounds pretty good actually. It's not exactly my cup of tea, but somehow I liked it.
I just felt you voice, or the vocal's line - to be more accurate - got lost in some parts, specially in the chorus and that made it lose a bit of its power. I also would like the lead voice more centered, not that much stereo-fied.
The production was amazing, by the way.
Good job dude.
> Iszil
Sounds pretty good actually. It's not exactly my cup of tea, but somehow I liked it.
I just felt you voice, or the vocal's line - to be more accurate - got lost in some parts, specially in the chorus and that made it lose a bit of its power. I also would like the lead voice more centered, not that much stereo-fied.
The production was amazing, by the way.
Good job dude.
> Iszil
I like it, it's got a pop-punk feel to it
The guitar & vox sound awesome, this is the type of song I would enjoy listening to
well done
The guitar & vox sound awesome, this is the type of song I would enjoy listening to
well done
This song is really awesome I really love it and I thought I reviewed it before but I guess I hadnt!
I really like it and your style. ace job
I really like it and your style. ace job
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