#1October 28th, 2009 · 04:18 PM
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United States of America
Raving Waterfall
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This song is not in a battle


I threw this together today after ages of not writing anything. Any comments & criticism & tips are welcome!

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#2October 28th, 2009 · 04:52 PM
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United Kingdom
Nice layering around the 2 Min mark.
Not bad since you had a break from it, how long was the break?
Hmm maybe change the drum kit, sounds too soft

Are we going to hear some more.
Once you get into it again and have FUN there'll be no Stopping you
#3October 30th, 2009 · 03:32 PM
8 threads / 2 songs
79 posts
United States of America
Denis wrote…
Not bad since you had a break from it, how long was the break?
Probably about a year, maybe a little more
#4October 30th, 2009 · 10:35 PM
158 threads / 13 songs
2,303 posts
United Kingdom
re: Raving Waterfall
I threw this together today after ages of not writing anything. Any comments & criticism & tips are welcome!

hard to add tipps without knowing how u did this ......... software etc???

so what did u use????

happy to help fish
#5October 31st, 2009 · 11:35 AM
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United States of America
fl studios and audacity
#6October 31st, 2009 · 12:06 PM
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United Kingdom
It's missing a whole bass layer as a body...the sounds are all too thin.
Except of course for the FAT synth.
I do like it's structure and flow, there's enough going on and it keeps to the point.
Play around with the 'default' sounds, humanize them and make them yours
keep it up
#7October 31st, 2009 · 01:22 PM
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United Kingdom
claudebukowski wrote…
Denis wrote…
Not bad since you had a break from it, how long was the break?
Probably about a year, maybe a little more

Well a year is along time, I've had a gap of three months because of other things I had to do. I'm back to practicing for the last two weeks and I'm just starting to get the feel again, I miss it so much. With me if I practice between half to 1 hour a day I find the creativeness comes more natural, rather than become inspired as and when.

You're off to a good start, keep at it, don't be afraid to ask for any help.
#8November 10th, 2009 · 10:42 AM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,795 posts
Germany
yeah the cymbals sound synthetic

the layer chords are great, I love them

the track has a nice vibe. time to relax...  thank you
#9November 15th, 2009 · 02:52 AM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,808 posts
Puerto Rico
Good ideas specially on the answer responce arrengent.The thick synth sounds bad ass...but its just somewhat loud compared to the rest..Nice work when both pick up together..Drums could use some work and you need a bass for sure..But this a great start!
#10November 15th, 2009 · 10:38 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,541 posts
Chile
I agree with Denis about the drums being to soft. When that lead synth comes up it simply eats the drums almost completely. I think you should turn down a bit the main synth and turn up the drums.
About the song itself I found it quite interesting... don't know what else to say.

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