I threw this together today after ages of not writing anything. Any comments & criticism & tips are welcome!

Nice layering around the 2 Min mark.
Not bad since you had a break from it, how long was the break?
Hmm maybe change the drum kit, sounds too soft

Are we going to hear some more.
Once you get into it again and have FUN there'll be no Stopping you

Probably about a year, maybe a little more

I threw this together today after ages of not writing anything. Any comments & criticism & tips are welcome!

hard to add tipps without knowing how u did this ......... software etc???

so what did u use????

happy to help fish

fl studios and audacity

It's missing a whole bass layer as a body...the sounds are all too thin.
Except of course for the FAT synth.
I do like it's structure and flow, there's enough going on and it keeps to the point.
Play around with the 'default' sounds, humanize them and make them yours
keep it up

Well a year is along time, I've had a gap of three months because of other things I had to do. I'm back to practicing for the last two weeks and I'm just starting to get the feel again, I miss it so much. With me if I practice between half to 1 hour a day I find the creativeness comes more natural, rather than become inspired as and when.

You're off to a good start, keep at it, don't be afraid to ask for any help.

yeah the cymbals sound synthetic

the layer chords are great, I love them

the track has a nice vibe. time to relax...  thank you

Good ideas specially on the answer responce arrengent.The thick synth sounds bad ass...but its just somewhat loud compared to the rest..Nice work when both pick up together..Drums could use some work and you need a bass for sure..But this a great start!

I agree with Denis about the drums being to soft. When that lead synth comes up it simply eats the drums almost completely. I think you should turn down a bit the main synth and turn up the drums.
About the song itself I found it quite interesting... don't know what else to say.

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