This is a song I made for this week's Game Creation Society music writing competition. The only rules were that it had to be less than 5 minutes and had to evoke the theme of "Showdown In the Canyon..." whatever that means.

A slightly louder master: http://www.matthewklingensmith.com/canyon.mp3

Hmm It would be interesting of you had a similar melody at the 1.14 mark to play with the rhythm at the start of the song, then perhaps two bars of rhythm, then change. The rest of the arrangement seems OK

Other than that I like the eastern feel, you could add some eastern percussion to enhance the feel.

I Would roll off some Bass from the bass so that you can hear the rest of the mix clearer.

Nice to see you writting again