I made this song for my girl friend. I need help with the lyrics so if any of you gays have any suggestion I'll be glad to hear them.  Thanks:  Cpbeats

Nice Intro
Yep this one has massive commercial potential, ask your lady female singer to collab.

Add some BIG vox and you'll gave a great song here!!

Sweet sound, nice stuff, cpbeats!

This is definitely deserving of some nice vocals, I agree.

You could also try finding a rapper in there, I guess?

Very nice, I can't think of any arrangement issues (other than adding vocals) to critique, hehe.

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im trying to remake 'all my life' by: kci and jojo but i cant get the piano notes down so if any body could help, i would deeply appreciate it.

THIS is the type of music that needs to be on the AMP, not this rock stuff. This is really well down, and very well thought out. I love the breakdown at the end. I agree find some vocals to add and it'll be great. Cool to see real music on here!