I call this song The Untitled Song because I didn't know what else to call it.   Hope you all like it.  Please comment I like comments.  Thanks

Interesting. It seems like you worked really hard on it. I like it.

yes i did work hard on it.  without any help

Well, it sounds really cool. Futuristic, and abstract. Do you mind commenting on my songs as well. "Hooked on Me", and "Touch".

Come on now you must be able to give this track a name??

Another track with potential, some female vox might work??

Cool. It's an interesting sound and the rhythm keeps it live. I love that one off note you hit at the refrain it really catches you by surprise. You've got the start of a cool song here but you definitely need more. Vocals or another instrument, really just something to carry a more definite melody throughout the song. It's good start though. I hope you keep working on this.

thank you all for you all comments.

Really cool beat.....very different
Love the cow bellish klong,
Does this need a bass track? maybe.
If you put an echo or delay on the harpsichord coming out of the left speaker or on any channel with a short bursts of a riff, so it would echo a part of the main riff underneath the main riff causing a 'flow' as compared to it's hip-hop stop start it now has.
A short female vocal sample could do a lot for it too.......would do a lot for you to, putting vocal samples in songs is fun and you learn so much.
Otherwise the only thing this song need is time......to develop into the next one.    

I like it... I think the best way to describe it is "simple complexity." Any given part is very simple. Straight-forward rhythms, no syncopation; but the way everything intertwines is unique, and works very well. How did you come up with the piano melody?

I just played around with FL Key in FL studio  .  I don't pre write my songs.  I just go off the top of my head.