#1October 18th, 2009 · 07:09 PM
58 threads / 44 songs
149 posts
United States of America
The Untitled Song
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This song is not in a battle


I call this song The Untitled Song because I didn't know what else to call it.   Hope you all like it.  Please comment I like comments.  Thanks

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#2October 18th, 2009 · 07:24 PM
15 threads / 8 songs
322 posts
Sweden
Interesting. It seems like you worked really hard on it. I like it.
#3October 18th, 2009 · 07:45 PM
58 threads / 44 songs
149 posts
United States of America
yes i did work hard on it.  without any help
#4October 18th, 2009 · 07:48 PM
15 threads / 8 songs
322 posts
Sweden
Well, it sounds really cool. Futuristic, and abstract. Do you mind commenting on my songs as well. "Hooked on Me", and "Touch".
#5October 19th, 2009 · 03:08 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,384 posts
United Kingdom
Come on now you must be able to give this track a name??

Another track with potential, some female vox might work??
#6October 20th, 2009 · 02:01 PM
102 threads / 59 songs
204 posts
Canada
Cool. It's an interesting sound and the rhythm keeps it live. I love that one off note you hit at the refrain it really catches you by surprise. You've got the start of a cool song here but you definitely need more. Vocals or another instrument, really just something to carry a more definite melody throughout the song. It's good start though. I hope you keep working on this.
#7October 20th, 2009 · 07:43 PM
58 threads / 44 songs
149 posts
United States of America
thank you all for you all comments.
#8October 21st, 2009 · 01:26 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Really cool beat.....very different
Love the cow bellish klong,
Does this need a bass track? maybe.
If you put an echo or delay on the harpsichord coming out of the left speaker or on any channel with a short bursts of a riff, so it would echo a part of the main riff underneath the main riff causing a 'flow' as compared to it's hip-hop stop start it now has.
A short female vocal sample could do a lot for it too.......would do a lot for you to, putting vocal samples in songs is fun and you learn so much.
Otherwise the only thing this song need is time......to develop into the next one.    
#9October 22nd, 2009 · 08:55 AM
7 threads / 7 songs
21 posts
United States of America
I like it... I think the best way to describe it is "simple complexity." Any given part is very simple. Straight-forward rhythms, no syncopation; but the way everything intertwines is unique, and works very well. How did you come up with the piano melody?
#10October 22nd, 2009 · 05:27 PM
58 threads / 44 songs
149 posts
United States of America
I just played around with FL Key in FL studio  .  I don't pre write my songs.  I just go off the top of my head.  
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