#1October 17th, 2009 · 12:15 PM
24 threads / 19 songs
171 posts
United States of America
No One Wins (fin.1)
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This song is not in a battle


This has to be pretty close to the finished product. I have a couple other ideas I might try. This was mixed on my 1990's boom box w/ 5" speakers, so I won't be surprised if there's mixing issues. I'll be getting some better monitors soon, and maybe I'll remix the song. Thanks for all your support (gives a yahoo out to Denis).

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#2October 17th, 2009 · 03:26 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,540 posts
Chile
Now I get it (making a reference at my comment on the first version of this song)
Some issues:
- The guitar tone is a bit too plastic. As a suggestion, cut the high frequencies to fix that.
- Your voice sometimes feels a bit weak, but I guess with time and confidence that will improve.
Well, this is sounding pretty nice now, but good job man.

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#3October 17th, 2009 · 05:27 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
Hey WW,
Your improving on each version, You're  heading in the right direction, just keep it going!!
The vox are better, there is still room for some improvement, I just sence it.
The mix is pretty good, the strings are just a wee to loud hence, your vox are sometimes shadowed.

I dissagree with Isil's comments about the Acoustic guitar (asuming it's the acoustic guitar your commenting on Isil)

I really like this song, I like the feel, originality, and presence.
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