After playing around with my KORG-10 DS Synth, I looked up more about techno and came across the "Amen Break". So I took the first bar of that, "looped" it, and made this, all on my DS.

(I didn't know how to use FL Studio with MP3 files... Oh well. Guess a simple Audacity recording had to cut it.)

   --XFactor--

ok, i don't know much about this music, but i like it ... your song has some energy in it and it feels nice... but i still feel, that it's just some kind of improvisation - it lacks something... like story(meaning) or so, thats why its good, that the song is short

Yeah, I know what it's missing - the main thing is the sound quality. See, the output of a Nintendo DS isn't that great, nor is it any better when hooked up into the microphone slot, so I think the main issue with the sound is the lack of "bass". There's not enough "oomph" too it, I guess, which even an equalizer can't fix... The tempo and flow of the song hints at it while it goes, and the drums aren't any better either, hahaha.

Still, thanks for the feedback - I'll be looking forward to writing drum tracks in FL Studio soon...!

    --XFactor--

I agree with the bass part, it would give it more 'oomph'. But, overall this sounds really cool.