This is the track a have been working most on! And yes I had some inspiration from Metallica
I have been playing guitar for 1 year and 2 moth so there may be some timing problems and bad recording.
Enjoy

The main riff is nice
Just need some HEAVY Bass, Drums & Vox

In deed, stunning axe, just needs the rest of the hoard.
Your recording sound sound to me.
And I'm not counting the beat so it all sound in place, it's just a little long with nothing else going on.

Why dont you do what Marino does and put it in FL add a killa drum track and some bass then add some well placed and well chosen samples and vuala!

ABOVE ALL............... ok where is the song?????

its a song site.......... not a riff runabout .........

get the vocals in here!!!!!!!!!

guitar great .........but means little without a voice!!!!!

GREAT GUITAR..................SO CAP IT WITH A GREAT VOCAL!!!!!!!!! PLEASE

I THINK YOU ARE SINGING IT IN YOUR HEAD........PROBABLY???

haha

fish ..................... grab a mike!!!!

HOW COOL IS BANDAMP????

Definitely sounds a lot like Metallica. Catchy riffs, but you need to develop this more. This is begging for some more instruments. If you can't get anyone to play some live instruments, you can always download some free drum loops.

 There are some timing problems but it's nothing you can't fix by practicing.

I really like the quiet breakdown at 3:00-3:45.

as mentioned, if you added drums, the whole thing would be lot better (if you did the drums properly of course )... so, pick up your GP and program!

otherwise, nice playing and riffs, but if it was evil-er, i'd be happier