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#1July 10th, 2005 · 09:43 PM
30 threads / 4 songs
177 posts
Spain
The Blue Room
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Score: 60.0%
Rank: 33nd
Battle: 2005-07

Welcome to the Blue Room...
I spent fair bit of time in a small blue room. It had with pictures of empty beaches where the blue sea stretches out to touch a deep blue sky.

A few blips crept in whilst bounding tracks on this recording unfortunately. Not an instrumental by choice - I can't sing to save my life.

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#2July 11th, 2005 · 11:28 AM
93 threads / 16 songs
1,254 posts
United States
this is great!  This is easy listening, if I've ever heard it!

did you have an idea for lyrics or some kind of theme?  I can feel it, but I'd like to know something about what direction you wanted to go with it!  I definitely feel the blue room though... very, very nice.
#3July 11th, 2005 · 09:29 PM
30 threads / 4 songs
177 posts
Spain
Direction
Hi there! Lyrics - I'm not too sure really. That means haven't a clue I suppose, but I'd pitch it as being in keeping with the laid back feel. I'd like to re-record it again at some point as it needs a better production - this is more of a rough recording to nail the ideas down while I work on something else.

Definately open to collaborations with other people, especially singers.

The direction was more driven on by imagery, colour, and escapeism - at any moment dreaming about being somewhere other than where you actually are - a brief oasis in time.

Thanks very much for your comments!
#4July 22nd, 2005 · 11:42 AM
really really really really liked this dong awsome. mayb the drums cud be worked on but other than tht it was gr8
#5July 22nd, 2005 · 03:21 PM
44 threads / 37 songs
132 posts
New Zealand
Ah this is great. I originally went in here because coldplay have an EP called 'the blue room' it's not like them, haha, but it's a fantastic melody

- Chester
#6July 23rd, 2005 · 10:33 AM
14 threads / 11 songs
171 posts
Canada
Very soothing. I'd have to agree that it needs something more, possibly singing.
#7July 24th, 2005 · 11:15 PM
7 threads / 7 songs
19 posts
United Kingdom
wowee
This song is really tight and relaxing to listen to . If you want it to be more then really relaxing background music then you really should add vocals
#8July 24th, 2005 · 11:17 PM
7 threads / 7 songs
19 posts
United Kingdom
wowee
This song is really tight and relaxing to listen to . If you want it to be more then really relaxing background music then you really should add vocals
#9July 26th, 2005 · 10:14 PM
30 threads / 4 songs
177 posts
Spain
Thanks for all the comments. I wasn't going to re-record it untill after my next project, but now I think I will!

Hopefully for next month sometime as I'm really busy at the moment.
#10August 13th, 2005 · 05:14 AM
28 threads / 13 songs
348 posts
Poland
re: The Blue Room
Well done! To my ear everything sounds ok, and it's a very nice composition. Keep it up.
#11August 13th, 2005 · 03:08 PM
30 threads / 4 songs
177 posts
Spain
Thanks! I'm in the throws of organising a new recording setup based around a PC, so hopefully I'll be able to record something new in the not too distant future...
#12August 22nd, 2005 · 08:38 AM
20 threads / 11 songs
166 posts
United States
the song really is set up for lyrics, but if you cant find a singer, or simply dont wish to change your original "vision", then add some kind of instrumental melody; until the guitar solo  comes in, your expecting lyrics.

The mood is so nice though, a simple melody on the keyboard (or whatever), would work very well. Of course, this is a said in a spirit of rebellion; Keep it instrumental if you want!
#13August 23rd, 2005 · 03:53 AM
29 threads / 21 songs
74 posts
United Kingdom
wow what a great introduction. i love the harmony! it would sound awesome with some vocals. i think maybe you should put i middle 8 in there... somewhere like just before your guitar solo. i love the sound you got on that solo by the way, what distortion are you using? sounds like an ibanez guitar or somethin... keep up the good work.
#14August 23rd, 2005 · 04:14 AM
30 threads / 4 songs
177 posts
Spain
Hi TessCrazy,

The distortion was from a Korg Pandoras Box (PX4) guitar module. Has some great sounds out of the box, although you can configure your own.

http://www.zzounds.com/item--KORPX4

My guitar is a bit crap really, it's a japanese cheapo fender strat, has worn out frets and zero sustain.

After that classical piece I just uploaded, I fancy letting rip a bit more with the guitar for the next one.

Glad you liked this one, thanks for the comments.
#15September 16th, 2005 · 07:28 AM
83 threads / 36 songs
2,598 posts
Netherlands
A number of possible vocal lines fade in and out of my head as I'm listening this. I really like this blue-pop style you have. One thing for the mix though: I'd put a little DSP on the drums to make them sound less dry - and you could also layer the drums, esp. the cymbals, which kinda give away the fact that this in not a professional recording.

all in all: great song! (btw. Saturnalia = also    )
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