here's another recording of that song but with bass and drums (no backing vocals though as Becci is away in Scotland) so not the finish article but getting closer

i love the groove you've got going on this, nice vocals and overall just very good

The percussion and bass really fills this out compared to version 1.  I really liked that one, but this is just fantastic.  The percussion I think is particularly well done and really builds upon the mood the guitar creates.  Bass is kept nice and simple and isn't distractin but adds body to the song.  Massive massive improvement on an already great chilled out tune.  Will be downloading this!!!

Kobeshi

cool as ice!!!!!

well done

not wet as kyle of loch alsh (Scotland) where i spent my holiday!!!!

very well done .................. loved this song

samba fish

Totally lovely song.

I have but one issue...I think this would totally shine if you sung with your head held up and if you 'projected' the words forwards more. You sing the mellow, chilled role beautifully because you do have a beautiful voice, and I love your accent, I'd just like to hear a more articulated vocal to go with such a clear recording.

Any chance of the lyrics, from what I make out they're also beautiful.

Another very good song courtesy of a very talented man.

Yes vincent, you're really improving, very polished, another great song.
I can understand what King's is saying about your vox, I think also you're are not taking enough air into your lungs and powering up through your gut, but I still love it just the same

Very Smooth

love the cool chord progessions.   nice chilled vocal line to it.  nicely done.