Unfinished Duel | ![]() ![]() ![]() |
I'm planning on writing more for this song - looking forward to eventually adding in more verse lines (still instrumental though). Was imagining an epic showdown of some sort, I guess.
Anyways... Yeah, I don't have much to say for this one. Enjoy.
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Anyways... Yeah, I don't have much to say for this one. Enjoy.
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Really enjoyed listening to that!
Really nice.
Some recommendations: The kick-drum sounds really plastic so try re-equalizing it. The piano sometimes sounds fake; I know it's hard to change that using VSTs, but try changing the volume of some notes and even "dis-quantizating" the track a bit, giving it a more human touch.
I like the arrangements a lot, but can't come with any idea of how to continue the piece. It's up to you, man.
Good job.
> Iszil
Some recommendations: The kick-drum sounds really plastic so try re-equalizing it. The piano sometimes sounds fake; I know it's hard to change that using VSTs, but try changing the volume of some notes and even "dis-quantizating" the track a bit, giving it a more human touch.
I like the arrangements a lot, but can't come with any idea of how to continue the piece. It's up to you, man.
Good job.
> Iszil
Thanks for your feedback, guys!
Yeah, I'm not a very good piano player (learnt up to grade 4 and quit because I hated theory), so most of the riffs are looped.
Again, every song that I've uploaded, except one, are purely MIDI-instruments that have gone through a converter. Plus, I haven't done much actual sound-editing before except removing unwanted "static" noises; I've only silenced sections of a track, ehehe... In other words, the "VST and quantinization part" that Iszil mentioned is honestly just gibberish to me. (Trust me, I looked it up and I didn't understand much of it at all, haha.)
And yes, it's going to be tough to add more onto the piece, but I think I'm going to revamp the ending so that it doesn't drop, then keep going - instead, I'll try for a cliffhanger ending where it just stops at the climax, then hits that low note at the very end. Like a move trailer, I guess.
Once again, thanks for the feedback - I will definitely work on getting a more "real" feel towards my MIDI.
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Yeah, I'm not a very good piano player (learnt up to grade 4 and quit because I hated theory), so most of the riffs are looped.
Again, every song that I've uploaded, except one, are purely MIDI-instruments that have gone through a converter. Plus, I haven't done much actual sound-editing before except removing unwanted "static" noises; I've only silenced sections of a track, ehehe... In other words, the "VST and quantinization part" that Iszil mentioned is honestly just gibberish to me. (Trust me, I looked it up and I didn't understand much of it at all, haha.)

And yes, it's going to be tough to add more onto the piece, but I think I'm going to revamp the ending so that it doesn't drop, then keep going - instead, I'll try for a cliffhanger ending where it just stops at the climax, then hits that low note at the very end. Like a move trailer, I guess.
Once again, thanks for the feedback - I will definitely work on getting a more "real" feel towards my MIDI.

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For starts, ditto what Denis said. This sounds really quite amazing in its current form, but with real instruments would be abbssoolutley stunning! Fantastic arrangment on this...drums need a bit of work as they sounded a little far back in the mix to my ears/on my speakers but that may just be me.
Cant believe I havent listened to more of your stuff on here before!!!
Cant believe I havent listened to more of your stuff on here before!!!
re: Unfinished Duel |
I See Where You Are!!!!!...............MIDI Compostion.........
And You Are Doing VERY WELL indeed!!!
Please Keep On Working this way ......... & produce more songs.........u will do well!!!
the computer and the programs will allways throw up challenges for you......
Just do more...................and explore the technology
I love what you are doing......
Go for it every time.......
Swordfish..........splash
And You Are Doing VERY WELL indeed!!!
Please Keep On Working this way ......... & produce more songs.........u will do well!!!
the computer and the programs will allways throw up challenges for you......
Just do more...................and explore the technology
I love what you are doing......
Go for it every time.......
Swordfish..........splash
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